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pj
Manqoba Mkhize
South Africa, gauteng, jhb

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A woman's beauty

It has been said before
That beauty is only skin deep
That a well crafted frame houses an evil heart
That your red lips drip honey
Which poisons the soul
That your juicy breasts decay the soul
And your voluptuous curves lead to a path of destruction.
But not you

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-12 11:57
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Wow. Very well written. Powerful and stunning. This is one of my favorite pieces by you. Really. I love it. It's almost like a lovely woman beckoning to a young child to come and get the candy....
pitbull Comment by: pitbull - 2008-06-12 01:27
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very nice as always..I love how you are able to say so much in just few words..good job
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-10 18:55
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Great. A very good experience! I like it very much.
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-06-10 12:53
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Watch out...I have a lovely apple for you...no just kidding PJ. Very short, yet powerful.
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