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chelseyam
Chelsey Cheesecake
United States

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Paranoia

"Hey? Hey, you?? You up? Are you awake?" Nothing. " Are you breathing??Helloooo? Answer me, will ya? "Silence. "I cant live without you. I need you around.Dont do this to me.Come on...HELLO? Wake up!"

"Im up."

"Christ, I thought Id lost you there."

"Oh, get real."

"I cant, not in this country."

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Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-06-21 23:42
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Lovely as always. You are a master. You give such clear pictures, in so little words. I cannot wait for the next thing you post!
jcp200817 Comment by: jcp200817 - 2008-06-12 17:17
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I enjoyed reading this...it had a very interesting way of getting the point across and it made it that much more interesting of a read. Thanks for sharing

Regards

Carlos P =]
heidiheimler Comment by: heidiheimler - 2008-06-10 18:40
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Touche'!
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