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He is here with me
every breath i take
no matter where
or how i live, he is there
I close my eyes and
he is there
holding me tight
when no one is around
just me and him
alone with the candlelight
whispering softly
in my ear
and then i awake
alone and confused
wondering why
he is there
the ghost in my dreams
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Hmmm... I think the words are not quite properly placed... I mean the lines don't support them... I like the theme being discussed and I reaaly like the way you divide your stanzas but I think it needs work...
