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| Very romantic, sweet and emotional... she must be very special - my best wishes PJ. ~T |
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| You effectuate a wealth of emotion with your words....I can see you making your change to this piece as needed. Your heart is completely in this....carry on my friend....now bring on a lovely rain....^_^ |
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Comment by: pitbull - 2008-06-12 01:19
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beautiful poem,so full of feeling in only 4 lines..got a tear in my eye..love it- the first line says it all..great work,keep it coming
cheers |
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Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-11 11:49
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I agree with Brokenwing and I'd personally write "washing away the dirt"
Other than that, a quiet and sweet piece. |
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| I like this. One small critique, however. Dirt & mud are redundant; I'd choose one & stick with it. |
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