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Confessional
I lay quietly
Watching you
Slowly advance
Towards the
Shrine you
Love
To worship
In your quest
For meditation
Zealous
Redemption
Of your faith
With no
Hesitation
Reservation
Or doubt
You kneel
At my altar
Head bowed
As you sip of
My warm wine
Taste my
Consecrated
Flesh, oh
Sweet Sacrament
Slipping into
My feminine
Sanctum
We meet in
Blessed union
Professing
Our sins
In whispered
and
Exquisite
Communion
Reaching
Our heavenly
Rapture
Your lips
Divine
Warm and
Sweet
On mine as
I lay completed
Contented
Languid
Liquid
Salvation
In our
Confessional
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Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-12 21:02
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| Crows, thank you...I'm sorry your lover is so very far away...that's got to be hellish... |
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Comment by: crows - 2008-06-12 20:44
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| This is a lovely one, Ms. Interestingly, I think it evokes the vaulted ceilings and resonance of a cathedral, though I couldn't tell you quite why I felt that way. Very sensual and lovely ;) (And oh, how I miss my own lover, absent me by two states! BAH!) |
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Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-12 09:43
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| PJ and Brokenwing, you are going to give me an overblown ego. Thank you~ |
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| Ahhh good lovemaking can be such a mystical, quasi-religious experience. Was thinking of writing something similar, but you beat be to it. Absolutely exquisite; perhaps your very best to date. The words are like butter melting on hot toast. So glad you were inspired by something I posted ;-) |
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Comment by: pj - 2008-06-12 01:54
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| Stunning Ms you got me hooked. Best piece i have read so far. I love it i love it.The imagery is mind blowing am out of words i trully enjoyed this one. Keep them coming you are a genious |
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