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chelseyam
Chelsey Cheesecake
United States

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technique

jugular

jugular

breath

turn over

turn over, curl up

wrist

jugular

breath

uncurl, curl again and left to neck, right to wrist

breathbreathbreathbreathbreath

jugularwritsweat

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Jorbian Comment by: Jorbian - 2008-06-20 18:08
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I have never seen a picture that clear, painted with so few words. This is excellent.
driftersonline Comment by: driftersonline - 2008-06-12 23:52
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Sounds like a bad case of the DT's.
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