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Karina K
Karina Kantas
Greece, Corfu

My Bookshop
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Fluffy poems

Nibbles

I can't sleep, so silently I creep.

Tiptoeing past their door

Oh I am a sneak.

I think I'll go downstairs

for a midnight snack.

I'll eat what I can

And then I'll hurry back.



Hunt


I see a pirate burying treasure

the pirate is Long John Silver, I can tell,

by his leg and his patch and his parrot as well.

I'm scared in case he caught me cause he'd make me walk the plank

And if he did, he'd never get the map to my secret piggy bank.

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roy Comment by: roy - 2006-08-05 17:03
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So sweet, I feel like I just read a whole fairy tale in a few words. I love the silent threat to Long John Silver, reminds me of how i used to warn off nightmares as a kid...:)
Comment by: - 2006-07-22 14:31
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A laugh out loud poem. So very childlike, takes me back. Great read, after reading so much heavy work, thanks.
mitra Comment by: mitra - 2006-03-17 20:12
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Cute. :D enjoyed it very much.
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-03-17 09:05
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Charming peice. Very modern.
noodel Comment by: noodel - 2006-03-15 12:54
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ha ha i really like nibbles but they're both really cute : )
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