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Fluffy poems
Nibbles
I can't sleep, so silently I creep.
Tiptoeing past their door
Oh I am a sneak.
I think I'll go downstairs
for a midnight snack.
I'll eat what I can
And then I'll hurry back.
Hunt
I see a pirate burying treasure
the pirate is Long John Silver, I can tell,
by his leg and his patch and his parrot as well.
I'm scared in case he caught me cause he'd make me walk the plank
And if he did, he'd never get the map to my secret piggy bank.
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Comment by: roy - 2006-08-05 17:03
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| So sweet, I feel like I just read a whole fairy tale in a few words. I love the silent threat to Long John Silver, reminds me of how i used to warn off nightmares as a kid...:) |
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Comment by: - 2006-07-22 14:31
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| A laugh out loud poem. So very childlike, takes me back. Great read, after reading so much heavy work, thanks. |
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Comment by: mitra - 2006-03-17 20:12
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| Cute. :D enjoyed it very much. |
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| Charming peice. Very modern. |
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Comment by: noodel - 2006-03-15 12:54
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| ha ha i really like nibbles but they're both really cute : ) |
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