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Count Abstract’s Poetic spell - challenge 17
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Once in a frying pan now in the fire
To avoid the fangs of a rampant vampire
Three blind mice growing Billy goats’ gruff
For a party in the cave of a Dragon named Puff
Five gold rings and a raven’s heart
Sixty baked-beans for a turbulent fart
Seven Unicorns with emerald eyes
Ate with an order of cold French Fires
Nine pence halfpenny and two pounds six
Ten thirsty tigers doing pussycat licks
(Not quiet sure what this spell evokes)
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Hum. hum hum. As far as poetry goes, you've got fun and evil mixed up with some wit. The rhyme scheme, basic as it is, works nicely.
The aliteration works very well, and so does your diction. Very easy and enjoyable read.
