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AngelWing
Amanda Zuercher
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United States, Idaho, Lametown

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Raindrops

The falling rain
wakes me from my dream
my dream about love and you
You standing there
getting ready to say goodbye
forever

The tears on my cheeks
reminds me of the rain
on the window pane
I hate dreaming of you saying
goodbye

But there you are standing
at my door smiling...laughing
I let you in but then you disappear
and leave me again

My heart shatters
like that of rain drops
on the pavement
I’ve died inside because you said
goodbye

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gamer with pen Comment by: gamer with pen - 2008-08-20 14:51
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the rain relly sets the mood...very nice.
lifemyjoy Comment by: lifemyjoy - 2008-07-24 19:01
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People can really really relat to this piece. This shows great emotion and I love this piece!!!!
Krystal
Qamar Comment by: Qamar - 2008-07-16 02:45
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If try to be more indirect that will bring more depth to your thoughts, hope you do not mind. Keep it up
Comment by: - 2008-06-19 11:13
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This flows so good. This piece is amasing. This is another piece that people can relat to their lifes!
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