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In Lieu Of
there's something to be
said about cigarettes,
but it's been said before,
I'm sure. So in lieu of
a good write, crafted
thoughtfully between
slow draws in of the
thing that will be my
death, I'll write this.
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Comment by: crows - 2008-06-23 14:41
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| This has a really interesting kind of cynicism that, somehow, is not unkind. I imagine you gazing at the smoke and smiling a little before setting pen to paper (or fingers to keys). I adore the last line particularly. |
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