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alcarty
Al Carty
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United States, New Mexico, Milan

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The New Life

The man smiled at his new self in the hall mirror. ‘Jason Carter,’ he thought. ‘I’m Jason Carter. I’ve got to remember that’s my name, now. I can’t slip up on a simple thing like my name. There’s a lot to remember; new name, Social Security number, town, state, starting a new job next week. I’ve got a whole new life ahead of me. Got rid of my moustache, bleached my hair. Jason Carter, that’s me.’

The doorbell interrupted his appraisal. ‘Now who can that be?’ “Yeah, who is it?”

“Mailman, sir. You’ve got mail, but you’ll have to sign for it. It’s registered.”

“Okay.” He opened the door.

“Just sign here, sir. Actually, it’s a package.”

He signed the form and handed it over to the man in blue. The mailman looked at it, then looked closely at the blonde man's features. He put his hand in the mailbag and pulled out a cylindrical parcel, wrapped in brown paper. The muzzle of a silencer protruded slightly. The mailman smiled.

“You signed the name wrong, pal. It should be Johnny Costello, huh? Remember Don Vittorio? He told me to say, ‘ciao, baby!’”

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alcarty Comment by: alcarty Online- 2008-07-03 15:07
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I'm glad if you liked it, Rebekah. I appreciate your comments. If something looks out of place or doesn't make sense, don't hesitate to jump on it! That's how we learn. Thanks.
crowdog2 Comment by: crowdog2 - 2008-07-03 13:46
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This is the third piece of yours that I've read. They are all well written. I like the ending to this one. I look forward to reading more.
alcarty Comment by: alcarty Online- 2008-06-30 08:19
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Thanks, David. These little challenges are very good excercise, and fun. Glad you liked it.
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-29 17:26
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Alcarty, nice work again. I can't help stoping reading your works, for they are nicely written. Best work! Best wishes.
alcarty Comment by: alcarty Online- 2008-06-25 10:06
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Good point, Lee. I'll drop the 'out front' line. Thanks for reading.
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