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Kevin3624
Kevin T
United States, New York, Painted Post

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Alcohol is Medicine

It eases the mind,
Slows down the 9-5 world,

Makes the stars
Shine brighter.

At the bottom of every
Bottle are not answers,

But a clairvoyant view of
Life,

Yourself.

It holds greater power
Than most give credit.

Yet a lot of you
Use for it for games,

You use it for
A bottom line,

You won’t do it
On a Tuesday

Because they
Say it is bad for your,

Yet you use it on
Friday until you puke.

You my friends are the addicts,
I am just the patient.

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Ashleigh315 Comment by: Ashleigh315 - 2008-06-17 14:09
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Great job! You can picture someone holding up an empty bottle looking for something. My dad is an alcoholic so I know what you talking about! I like it!
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-16 23:18
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I like this. I grew up in a family of alcohol. I can certainly relate to alot of this....nicely done~
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