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MitchellNoel
Mitch Kelly
China, Guangdong, Guangzhou

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Our only connection was the back-and-forth of hidden meanings embedded in blogs.

A poem about how he let me go met with retaliation in the form of a short story about how I pushed him away. “You Cheated” inspired “Do You Blame Me?” No matter how many fiery arrows I shot at him, miles away, they came right back at me, frozen. Global ping-pong. For five years.

Then came the flood. The Great Inbox Overflow of 2008.

Some were long.

Title: One more naïve attempt at getting your attention (sorry this is a long one).
Body: It’s been a long time. We’ve gone our separate ways, but that doesn’t change the fact that I miss you and really want to...(and so on).

Others were short.

Title: Talk to me…
Body: …please.

Some were casual.

Title: What’s up?
Body: Check out this link. I think you’ll like this song.

Others were blunt.

Title: Fuck you
Body: Yeah, you heard me. FUCK YOU!

They continued to pour over the course of a year. More than one hundred emails.

I read them all. Every word. But I never replied. Not even to the last one.

Title: Cancer.

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alien Comment by: alien - 2008-08-01 04:54
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Just had another little read of this. Letting you know I stopped by.

:)
Lee Lacuna Comment by: Lee Lacuna - 2008-06-24 23:56
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A good take on the subject.
MitchellNoel Comment by: MitchellNoel - 2008-06-23 18:56
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thanks so much to everyone for the positive feedback.
Phil-There is at least a little bit of fiction in there...
phillmag Comment by: phillmag Online- 2008-06-23 05:52
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i think this is excellent. i hope it is fiction. i can only echo other's faves.
alcarty Comment by: alcarty - 2008-06-19 10:11
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Strong stuff, Mitchell. Well-worded, and it achieved a heavy dramatic impact. Good work.
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