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Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-24 17:32
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| Thanks, Crows. When I wrote the haiku, I tried to show what I had seen. Iam so pleased that you have read my mind so well. Would you please give me more advice on writing? Looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes. |
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Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-24 17:28
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| Dear Zigzag, thanks very much for the nice comment. I will try to do better in Haiku writing. I hope you can give me more advice. Best wishes. |
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Comment by: crows - 2008-06-24 11:25
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| Reminds me of home, where the only time that it wasn't too light to see a good fireworks display was in the dead of winter. New Years hits, for us, in one of the absolute coldest times of the year, but the benefit to the fireworks is that it's perfectly clear and black, and the light reflects off the December snowfall. Beautiful and serene, I can here the pop of the explosives drifting through the brittle, winter air and stinging my cheeks :) |
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Comment by: ZigZag - 2008-06-22 20:59
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| I don't know how anyone could read this poem and NOT smile. It gets a beautiful image and an emotion response in so little time. Nice Haiku! |
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Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-21 05:25
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| Again thanks very much, Pj. I prefer to do observation in life. However, I will have to learn from you. I like your writing style too. Best wishes. |
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