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driftersonline
Gas Beer and Cheeseburgers
Canada, Alberta, A small Hamlet

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coffee blues

one cup of coffee down
eleven to go
i gotta keep up with my baby
maybe do some blow

she’s drinkin’ Wild Turkey
down in Oklahoma
if I don't bring her more
she'll put me in a coma 

~driftersonline~

6/20/08

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wordz Comment by: wordz - 2008-07-26 07:38
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delightful poem. compact. wild turkey, coffee, and blow. that covers a lot of ground!
phillmag Comment by: phillmag Online- 2008-06-21 03:56
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i was a double digit coffee drinker when i did nights. good rhythm, good rhyme, good poem.
chelseyam Comment by: chelseyam - 2008-06-20 20:24
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wot the hellre you on about mannnnnn :P
nadinesellers Comment by: nadinesellers - 2008-06-20 17:28
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as good as a sad song gets.
get some rest?
driftersonline Comment by: driftersonline - 2008-06-20 17:26
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Coma. Thanks heidiheimer.
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