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pj
Manqoba Mkhize
South Africa, gauteng, jhb

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hard to find

A love stronger than a diamond
Buried in the masses of coal

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-22 06:52
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Well done! I like this poem very much, especially the style. Best wishes.
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-06-21 20:40
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Gives me an intense feeling of heartache...suddenly stripped. Kudos!!
B*_^
heidiheimler Comment by: heidiheimler - 2008-06-21 10:27
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A sad statement, if I understand correctly: that something so powerful and so wonderful should be so unattainable (or am I misinterpreting?)
Anyway, wonderful use of few words to convey a large idea. Thanks!
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