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FantasticFantasy
Raven Feels Much Better
United States, North Carolina, Hillbilly Hell

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Indecision at the Movies

My skin begins to blush and crack
as my eyes make their way down her back.
She's really changed since I saw her last,
She's single?!? Better move in fast!

Should I say something funny?
Should I say something sweet?
Do I look okay?
Is my hair still neat?

So I make her laugh, I'm good at that,
I wonder if she won't like me because I'm too fat...

I think this went well... I hope she likes me too,
Now, next... What do I do?!?

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bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-06-23 17:37
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Hilarious awkward teenage moments. Like the whimsy about this one. Best,Bebe :-)
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