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DavidHe
David He
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China, Pinliang, Pingliang

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A warm summer breeze
The bamboo leaves dance softly
Music fills my ears

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-29 16:53
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Thanks, Alcarty, for your kindness. Best wishes.
alcarty Comment by: alcarty - 2008-06-29 11:46
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It is lyrical and soothing. Good work.
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-29 00:35
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Thanks very much for the comment, Fallenstar. Best wishes.
fallenxstar Comment by: fallenxstar - 2008-06-28 21:15
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Very nice! thank you for sharing!
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-06-26 06:35
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Thanks very much, PJ. I will try to do better, for in writing there is no best but just better. Best wishes.
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