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DavidHe
David He
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China, Pinliang, Pingliang

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On the sunlit sink
Mother slices potatoes
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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-09-11 01:21
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Thanks again for commenting. I have much to be desired. I need your further help. Best wishes.
fureyaersoy Comment by: fureyaersoy - 2008-09-10 00:49
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Your words creating powerful images, beautiful and it is a pleasure to read. Well done.
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Johndeprey Comment by: Johndeprey - 2008-08-29 03:49
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Beautiful image. It reminds me of a tiny hotel I stayed in in Penang where the lady of the house played Chinese opera as she worked. I was more receptive to that than I was watching a Chinese opera, for 2 hours! I like the three worlds in this tiny poem.
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-08-21 18:41
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Thanks again, Apheliac, for your kind comment. Best wishes.
Apheliac Comment by: Apheliac - 2008-08-21 08:13
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Awww! Love it! Am starting to appreciate haiku. *be careful - sounds addictive...*
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