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Koinonia
Hannah Thorley
United Kingdom

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Good Night

“Good night.” The last words I ever said to him.

Car alarm blaring, feet thudding down the stairs, the front door opening.

They told me in the morning.

“He’s dead.”

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jeremydevaughn Comment by: jeremydevaughn - 2008-07-01 16:23
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This really is flash fiction. heh
Good story, though.
Short, sour, and to the point.
hissymcr Comment by: hissymcr - 2008-06-29 06:39
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I love how you were able to put so much into so little. Wonderful job!
ZigZag Comment by: ZigZag - 2008-06-27 17:03
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You cram such powerful emotion into so very few words. You allow the reader to visualize everything without much description. Amazing.
NovaDaycon Comment by: NovaDaycon - 2008-06-27 14:59
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Very visual :) i like it.
anthonyjlangford Comment by: anthonyjlangford - 2008-06-27 05:11
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this happend to me once...

good
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