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metaphysicalg
George McMillan, Jr
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United States, PA, York

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Unfinished Business

Do you want my path?

Putting yourself through
All the pain you've ever caused
The people from your past

Would you do that to yourself?

Does it ever make things right?

Or is that not the point?

I already 'willed' my choice


June 24, 2008

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metaphysicalg Comment by: metaphysicalg Online- 2008-06-26 20:16
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thanks, didn't catch that.
Drose Comment by: Drose - 2008-06-26 05:29
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I like it, good work
RyanWHarris Comment by: RyanWHarris - 2008-06-26 02:54
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Hi, great poem very powerful, I think the word "though" in the second stanza should read "through" just a quick observation, great work keep it up.
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