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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
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United States, WA, Seattle

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Lockdown

If I lead gently
Will you follow
As I close my eyes
Swaying softly
Rhythmically
Moving us
To the music
Only I can hear?

Could you trust me
Enough to dance along?

If I stamp my feet
In frustrated
Overload
My childish
Petulance
Winning out
Over adult
Rationality
Trying your
Patience and
Goodwill

Can you love me
Despite and inspite
Of myself?

When I break down
And weep
Like a wounded
Child broken
And lost
Feeling I’ve
Nowhere to run
But into your arms

Will you help me
Find my way?

If I seduce
Mesmerize
Hypnotize
Paralyze and
Capture you
With mysterious
Mata Hari charms
Leaving you
Breathless
With desire
Will you be
My slave?

Could you still find
sweet release
in the little girl
inside me?

If I open my heart
And let you see
My fears
My sorrow
My dreams of
Tomorrow
And the scars
I bear from all
My yesterdays

Would you be able
To see past my
Many flaws?

Will you listen
To my silent words
Unspoken
Will you catch the
Smile in my tears
Can you love
The many women
You see in my eyes

And still look upon me
With a loving glance?

Can I be all I am
All I’ve been
and all
I want to be?
Can I feel free
To be me
When I’m
With you?

Or do I remain
In lock down?

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-07-10 06:37
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David, I'm not sure what you mean...? But thank you for reading and liking this one...
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-07-10 04:19
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Wow, great work. I appreciate your style. Why not let others master it with your help? Best wishes.
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-29 09:51
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Ha! June I have indeed been called incorrigible but not always in as lovely a way as you have just called me *smile*...thank you~
junenandy Comment by: junenandy - 2008-06-29 00:53
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"Can you love
The many women
You see in my eyes"

Dearest Alicia...what adorable lines you create. And then this:

"Can I feel free
To be me
When I’m
With you?"

Bless You the eternal incorrigible Woman!

Thanks.
June
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-28 23:23
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Wildfleuer, what I think you meant to say was that we need to look within and see if we trust ourselves enough to open our hearts for someone else's disposal or acceptance, yes? If we cannot trust ourselves to know that it's ok to open ourselves up to someone with whom we want to share our hearts and soul, how can we expect them to?
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