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thembraincells
Katie js
United States, Wisconsin, Brookfield

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talk 2 u tmrw?

alright this ones kind of shit. lol. whatever its how i feel



Right now I'm away in a faraway place,
But everywhere is a familiar face,
People that love me,
People that care,
With the same color hair,
Cause we're all family here.

But I still feel alone,
Just like back home.
And I know it's been great,
But there's a feeling I can't shake.

A lot has happened while I was away,
Brian's now dead,
And though I am very well fed,
I feel so empty,
Because facial twitches and insomnia...
Well they tear me away.

And then Im online,
with the old 79's.
And they've got a question for me.
But that's when you called.

You tell me everything,
And from Bridget to Hannah,
I still love you.
And you've dated others, but I didn't let go,
And your asking who I like.

And I just tell you to guess,
And then it hurts, and over the phone,
I'm not so alone,
And you guess right,
I really put up a fight,
But the old 79's,
Well, this is the question I'll say yes too.

And you like me too.
When you have to go, I ask
To call back tomorrow,
And I waited up.

The phones made me feel hella alone.
And for once in my life,
I've got a question for you...

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kamereon Comment by: kamereon - 2008-09-01 15:02
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honesty is always the best expression...
michellemarie Comment by: michellemarie - 2008-06-30 06:20
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i love the idea behind this. the last line really makes the reader think. great!
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