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Twice broken,
Thrice unnoticed,
The fourth vice I voted…
The most likely locust.
Might never measures,
What’s right of the weather.
Five shiny levers
Changed life forever.
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I love the compactness of this, the repetition of syllables. Particularly voted/locust... that makes my brain very, very happy. I'm always a sucker for things with very tiny wordcounts, particularly when they're as well constructed as this.
