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soul
roy ellenburg
United States

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satinsilk

the dip of your hip,
the high rise of your thigh---

your touch so warm,
sunshine beneath your flesh,

to caress the clouds who pass,
without disturbing upon the path between your collarbone and colourful eyes.

this has nearly become an obession,
this appreciation of your form
forming myself to you-to hold you

satin against silk these diamonds against coal stones.

what will you say, oh mushroom princess?

how will you heed such a call, lovely maiden?

-soul.

I posted this by request of Miss Alicia Wizard.

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Kav Comment by: Kav - 2008-07-15 22:42
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This has a lot of imagery and your words flowed beautifully bringing this piece life. Loved it!
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-06-30 00:11
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I'm so very pleased that you posted this...It's a gorgeous piece and should be shared....thank you~
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-06-29 17:44
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Great work! I like it very much. Looking forward to reading more of your works! Best wishes.
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