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nivipooh
Nivedita G
India, Maharashtra, Mumbai

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The Letter

For,
My love who is precious than my own life.

There is only one thing that I have kept hidden from you till now. You would have no idea nor any ryhme or reason to even suspect, any involvement of mine in you other than my friendship. But my dearest, it was necessary to keep my love for you under many protected covers. If you want to know why, I think you could answer that yourself.

I was afraid that you might break away from me. Go so far away I may not be able to reach you there. So I wanted to sustain with dearest life the ever-growing friendship between us. But believe me when I say darling, you are the one I love the most in this entire earth. My love for you is so deep as an ocean that it washes away all the scars on my heart by your indifference towards me.

I am fully aware of the matters you are scared about. I want to be the one, to be beside you when you gather all courage to fight your own fears. In your blue days, I want to be there to wipe out the single tear from your eyes. Again I want to be the one whose every word would make you laugh and talk forever.I want to be there to share the happiness you feel when you see the rain pouring outside. I want to be the one on whose arms you would go to sleep when you are tired.

I want to see every sunrise and sunset with you. I want to see you jealous if my eyes drift elsewhere from your face. I want you to scold me on my foolish deeds. I want you to love me like nobody has loved before. I want to feel your lips trembling when you want to kiss me. I want you to hug me so tightly that we become one. I want to rave my hands through your hair and hear you groan with relief.Just by your single touch firework gets created in me.

I know you want to feel secure and I can and I will make you feel the securest in my arms. My eyes know what you think even before you say it. I want to bring all your dreams to reality. I want to be the one who cures you of all your fears. I want to be that support for you which will never fall short.

Your smile works wonders with me. My morose day lightens knowing you are glad to see me. Your enthusiam is contagious and flows everybody your way. Your weird sense of humour which I want to be a part of.

Sometimes I feel, what have I been doing till now and it becomes very difficult for mere human like me to resist the temptation to reveal my love for you. You have no idea as to how your bitter words cut through my heart. The pain I feel keeps me awake all night thinking what did I do wrong. Whenever I close my eyes your beautiful face floats in front of me. Soon very soon I will see stars in the daylight.

Darling I want to be that person whom you would want to live every moment with, share tears and laugh with, rest your head and feel that you made the right choice. So what are you waiting for, come running towards me. For i will be waiting forever with my arms stretched and whispering my love uncountable times for you and only you.

I LOVE YOU.

Yours always

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Hariharan Comment by: Hariharan - 2008-08-23 00:32
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Hey.. a nice poetry flowing down as a form of letter....
vlm Comment by: vlm - 2008-07-16 18:31
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That kind of passion is part of youthful infatuation. It scrambles our emotions like eggs in a skillet. But it is also a time when we feel truly alive, for Love is only for the living.

I felt it as deeply as a cut wound in my hand. How I wish someone could love me as much.
heidiheimler Comment by: heidiheimler - 2008-07-04 16:36
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You captured the deepest of emotions - a lovely piece!
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