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| This poem is great. I love the juxtaposition of the ideal with the reality. I wrote a poem about my ideal place once and ended it "I wake up to realize my sock is inside out." Great minds think alike! |
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Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-06-30 17:29
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| A good dream that every one likes to have. I expect to have such a dream in future. Best wishes. |
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This is a different style for you, however you always have my attention. I love it.
To live in a dream would be to live in a bubble I suppose, but wouldn't it be nice at times?
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I smiled when I read "the lion was a vegetarian" - great line!
If the world is full of annoying mosquitos, at least we can find solace in dreams...
Wonderful poem - thanks PJ. |
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| that's really cute. although short, it tells a great story! great work. |
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