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Beck
Dan Beck
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I'll never forget the day you punched yourself in the face...

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Now there’s a small boat -
about four years from here
tumbling in waves
a hundred feet high.
Lightning occasionally strikes
it’s abandoned deck
exorcising the hope that lies
beyond hidden shorelines.

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history Comment by: history - 2008-07-01 04:39
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Of course you know I'm going to say it's beautiful poem, because I always do and it's always true, you maddening, talented beardy. But, that has to be my favourite title of this year, haha! Mainly because I did it to myself the other day when I didn't realise my hand was dead. Ahh, happy days.

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