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nealmcdonald
Neal McDonald
United States, Oregon

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reach

Lost mind, found soul
plagues my delusions.
Felt long, known not
I stumble into.....

Red trail, steel plow
paper thin, guides the flow
Respite, relief
reassurance of belief

All can help me is,
will be and
was
Me.

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Saihetei Comment by: Saihetei - 2008-07-01 02:00
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Haunting words! It elicits bizarre images within the mind.
RyanWHarris Comment by: RyanWHarris - 2008-07-01 00:48
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Hang in there! I picture a man in a straight jacket in an institute.keep up the good work
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