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DavidHe
David He
China, Pinliang, Pingliang

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Kiss and Tears

In the candlelight
Father turns to kiss mother
Tears spring from her eyes

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-08-07 06:42
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Thanks again, Bebe. I will try to do better. I would like you to superwise me in writing if you like. Best wishes.
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-08-07 05:26
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Powerful statement of true emotion. Absolutely beautiful haiku! Best, Bebe :]
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-07-22 17:27
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Thanks very much, skypoetone, for the nice comment. I am greatly encouraged. Best wishes.
skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-07-22 08:28
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This is one of those haiku were you can read the lines in any order and it still make sense... thus, great essence. ~T
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-07-08 18:28
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Thanks very much, Tonya. I am greatly encouraged by your comment. I will try to do better. Best wishes.
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