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DavidHe
David He
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China, Pinliang, Pingliang

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Steam from Snow

Mantle of clean snow
A hot spring melts through the crust
Steam wafts in the air

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-07-17 01:56
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Thansk you, Itsdefnotme.I am fond of haikus. Yet I am no good at it. I will try to do better. Best wishes.
ItsDefNotMe Comment by: ItsDefNotMe - 2008-07-16 22:05
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You certainly have a great talent for haiku. Whenever I read any of your short poems I have very vivid images in my mind. As if we are looking at the same picture.
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-07-16 16:23
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xxJKxxkilmaxx, thanks very much for the comment. Best wishes
xxJKxxKilmaxx Comment by: xxJKxxKilmaxx - 2008-07-16 10:14
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mushroom eating an alligator in your toothbrush sock!
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-07-12 17:06
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Dear Autodepressive, thanks for the commment. We can share more if we are often here. Best wishes.
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