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A loud cry
'Love you'does not work lady
It causes no wave
In the vast eternity
Old cliches
Old phrases
Get repeated millionth time
Life gets repeated itself
Love is but an abused pattern.
I am the warrior believe
Fighting for the glow
In the stone named "Love"
Newly cut
Refurbished.
Fighter for Love
Can be a warrior?
Brooding head falls to pillow
Heavy
Tears roll by
Oh! are salty drops forever
They are fraud and liars!
They ought to be sweet,see
In my new pattern of Love
Only then one covets
To Love and be Loved
No fabrication permitted
I am true warrior you see
Buddha
Zen
In silence I devour
Heartfull of "I Love You"
@Abhinaw'Kathmandu
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some lines miss some spaces, yeah ! I feel that you are in love, diving into the depth of it. swim, swim and swim .....
the poem is really appreciating and hope it will do better.
