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You always thought I was the strong one.
You always thought that I was holding you up.
Baby dont tell me your leaving, I fear that I will fall.
Dont you see neither of us were strong.
We were strong together,
but apart we will crumble.
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sounds like a guys final plea to his girl, I think u should change in the second stanza "was" to "were" unless u wanted to keep it as slang. otherwise it was good but I really wanted more.
