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I never said I had an elephants memory. I said I would always remember you.
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I never said I had an elephants memory. I said I would always remember you.
Staring off into the mirror that sits in front of me.
I see a persong that I simply dont recognize.
Is it possible that I have changed so much¿
Was your influence so great taht it still persists¿
Comback to me! Just let things be
like they were when I stared off into your eyes
dreaming of our future and the such.
I dont know if my love will every seize to exist.
As I look into my own eyes
I wonder if I will ever be able
to close them and not see you...
and not see you.
In a few years you will call me a stranger
not knowing I was the man you once loved.
That will be when I will make my move....
I will rekindle the flame that once was.
Where fire once burned,
there will always
be embers ready
to be lit once more.
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I really liked this piece. It shows a great love that this guy has for his ex, but on the other hand its a little creepy almost like he has become infatuated with her watching and waiting for his time to resurface and make her fall in love with him again. I really liked this.
