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nivipooh
Nivedita G
India, Maharashtra, Mumbai

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Humor Me

“This discussion has gone quiet far.” He said, inadvertently trying to exude the remaining mental peace. His shoulder was throbbing and he could no more concentrate further.
“Alright, then humor me, for a while.” She said not convinced yet giving him a chance.
“I did not do it. Now do you want me to explain it further, would you even listen?” He pursed his lips in frustration.

She smiled even in a situation like this. She wanted to say ‘No’ but her sheer nature to always come up with the unexpected answer allowed her to say, “Yes I would, why don’t you tell me without wasting any further time.” She looked at her watch to give her speech a final touch.
He was mildly surprised that she said ‘Yes’ but he should have known otherwise. He had an affair with her for two years. Until recently, six months back when she had asked him to stop meeting her as her husband was getting suspicious. He was happy as he had his secretary to have fun with in her place.
“Okay, I was chasing him, but he stopped suddenly as if sensing my presence. I quickly hid behind a pillar. I heard the gun shots and I peeked to see. That’s when the bullet came tearing into the flesh of my shoulder. I saw a black Ford and its window rolling up. I staggered near his body and fell unconscious. I cannot be accused of his murder. Its not possible.” He finished.
“Then how do you explain the gun in your hand, when they found you? She adjusted her glass frame and scrutinized him.
“We have gone over and over about this. It is my gun but I wasn’t carrying it with me. I don’t know how it was there in my hand when they found me.” He almost cried out aloud.
“Do you think I am a fool? You hired me and you are paying a good amount. Let me remind you for every hour that you spend wasting, giving me a story full of crap. I don’t think you have understood the implication of this accusation, or the situation that we are having a conversation in a jail about a murder, just not any murder but that of my husband. Oops I meant my late husband.” She winked at him.
“My hour is up as your lawyer.” She got up and left.
With nothing to do in his cell, he looked out the only 12”inch by 12’inch window. He was shocked to see her get into a black Ford and drive away.

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poetguyraza Comment by: poetguyraza - 2008-07-23 01:56
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Hmmm.. Yes indeed the ending is quite nice nut I'd agree with Mortelle about the vocabulary... It seemed forced... I love the idea though... Very well done... Keep up the good work ;)
vlm Comment by: vlm - 2008-07-07 16:27
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It seems to me that you are illustrating the point that women are as bad as men when it comes to being underhanded and they should not be underestimated.
Mortelle Comment by: Mortelle - 2008-07-06 11:16
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It has a nice twist at the end and is generally a good story, but it seems like you were trying too hard to prove that you have a good vocabulary.

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