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campino
James Thomson
United Kingdom, northampton

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making a stand

revenge is best served cold,
sometimes its ok to dwell of the old,
karma doesnt always take care of it,
shattered morals can be re-lit,
people can't get away with what they do,
never is the answer to repent or sue,
a lesson taught is a lesson learned,
a bit of wisdom they will have earned,
eye for an eye, tooth for a tooth,
destroy the problem to bring the truth,
the whole world can be so narcissistic,
the human race can be such a prick,
for people who agree I'll give you a clap,
If this is you, you deserve a slap,
yourself, your friends, your family you should avenge,
stick with them until the end.

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Kit Cosette Comment by: Kit Cosette - 2008-07-06 22:14
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"a bit of wisdom they will of earned,"
consider changing the "of" to a "have"

Otherwise I like the running feeling of the piece, very breathless and frenzy-feeling.
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