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It Was Here
It was here,
amidst the spectrum of colors,
the song of your heart loud in my ears,
each brush of skin,
each caress,
each gossamer kiss that we shared,
whispered nothings that meant everything,
a twist of sheets as we exchanged body heat,
it was here,
that I realized I love you.
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| I loved how well this flowed! Great imagery too, short and sweet. Great work. |
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| Awe, very nice... very moving... I wish someone felt that way for me... you know, in all my life not one single woman has ever written me a poem... that's weird because I'm an artist, you would think that I would attract an artist opposite... hmm. Anyway, this was really moving. Thanks for sharing. |
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Comment by: - 2008-07-07 13:52
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I like the use of abstract phrases u used. It was very sweet and romantic.
I would love to read more of your poetry.
~Becca |
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This is hugely similar to my piece, Paint Stains in the Sun. But its poetry, and better than my little diatribe. Very sweet, and expressive.
Vyasar |
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