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Sarafina Condidori
United States

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Goodnight, Sweet Lady

Sipping champagne could not be more romantic.
Debutantes wearing elegant gowns dripping with jewels
Everyone positioned around the piano singing and laughing.

A moment, an instant. A single glance.
So Sexy, so divine.
With a sideways nod the dancing begins.

Twirling and whirling of mind and body,
The cascade of notes from the trumpets
Playing the spirit of the soul.

Feet barely touching the dance floor,
While the gowns are gracefully flowing.

Kisses, stolen on the dance floor.
Glances, stolen across the room.
Dances, willingly given late into the evening.

The evening must end.
With one last kiss.

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Kav Comment by: Kav - 2008-07-07 05:00
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This has a lot of imagery and good flow. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for the read
Kit Cosette Comment by: Kit Cosette - 2008-07-06 22:07
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HuUm, I like it because it reminds me of a book I read.
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