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Nillx
Trevor Scott
United States, Indiana, New Haven

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An Independent Work of Art

Rain drops filling blue eyes to the brim

A rose’s thorns cutting deep into the hand of the one who
grew it

A chain of events set into action with one final thrust

A murderer of mind and heart

A conqueror of vast worlds

A fool

A coward

A cross to bear

But not his…

Blue eyes scarred by red lightning bolts

Two strait lines that don’t belong

The flesh is marred

The flesh is marred

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Artorius Comment by: Artorius - 2008-07-09 11:46
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It seems sad and angry, I like it, it's different (in a good way).
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