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Fortress?
July 15, 3508 – Site of n'yk, n'yk
Two to three meters thick, and twenty meters high, the wall dominated the landscape. It might have been higher, except time had worn it down. It stretched as far as the eye could see, and further. Something intended to be impossible to pass, or circumvent. The archaeology team had excavated an area at the foot, some ten meters deep, and still the wall went down.
"At least another four meters." Jacobsen looked up from his graphs. "That will take us to when the wall was built, but there is more under that – rubble, I guess."
Why would anyone build such a wall? Who – or WHAT – was it intended to keep out?
"What do you think this means?" Morris finished his plaster cast of what looked like words chiselled into one massive stone.
The director, expert in 20th century languages, now long forgotten, sounded out the words:
We can't go over it,
We can't go under it,
We've gotta go through it!
"Damned if I know."
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I thought "Great Wall" as well, except "n'yk n'yk" had me leaning toward the Three Stooges. Hmmm, 1500 years into the future...
an interesting puzzle. |
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Comment by: mickeyp - 2008-07-19 08:42
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| Nice and clear, Peter, as I'm used to expect from your work. Could be expanded, but still looks fine how it is. Reading this I was reminded of Barthelme's story/dialogue, "The Glass Mountain"; similiar in subject matter, though I have to say that yours differs in its being comprehensible. Check out his work, though. Thanks for the read. |
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| You got me thinking. Hmmm... |
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Comment by: Arley - 2008-07-10 11:00
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| Hmm, let's see what we've got here 500 hundred years into the future . . . I figure n'yk n'yk stands for New York, New York but damned if I can figure out the wall. Maybe a ways from where the excavators are they'll find the Lincoln Tunnel, but damned if I know. Good stuff! |
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Comment by: WLC - 2008-07-10 09:11
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My first thought was The Great Wall of China--until the chiselled words part. So now I'm really wondering!!!
Hmm...maybe the chiselled words are graffiti put there after civilization outlawed spray paint cans. Kids will be kids, even in 3508. :) |
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