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charlieomatic
charlie helinski
United States, new york, new york

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here's how you’re gonna write your next piece of fiction...

...

A Riff on ‘Dem Bones, Dem Bones, Dem Dry Bones’

dem cells, dem cells, dem brain cells
dem cells, dem cells, dem brain cells
dem cells, dem cells, dem brain cells
now hear th’ words in yer gord.

the adverb’s connected to the adjec tive
the adjective’s connected to the now un.
the noun’s connected to the ver erb,
now hear th’ words in yer gord.
(quieter...)
now hear th’ words in yer gord.

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chelseyam Comment by: chelseyam - 2008-07-11 17:15
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that the shirley method?
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