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alcarty
Al Carty
United States, New Mexico, Milan

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A Family Matter (#40)

Business was good, but then mortuaries seldom have slack periods. I was taken in and learned the trade after Dad went to prison. It was a shock to the family when he was convicted as a contract-killer, but Uncle Mort gave me a home. His son, my cousin Marvin, didn’t smile when I moved in. He liked it even less when my uncle started taking me to work.

After awhile the grisly procedures became routine; the liquid dripping in the stainless tubs and the smell of formaldehyde were just part of the job. Uncle Mort said I was a natural, and he openly praised my progress.

“You’re going places, Jake,” he said. “I’m opening another shop, soon. You or Marvin will be running it.”

“That’ll never happen!” said Marvin, when we were alone. “I’ll put you in a box, first!”

So I made plans to visit Dad, for professional advice.

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alcarty Comment by: alcarty - 2008-07-20 10:19
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Now she's being elusive. Ignore her. Thanks for the comments, Mitchell.
WLC Comment by: WLC - 2008-07-20 06:38
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;)
MitchellNoel Comment by: MitchellNoel - 2008-07-19 23:23
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very satisfying piece, Al. You set-up the relationships really well and we feel the jealousy of Marvin...then the unexpected twist (and very funny) ending shows us another side of the MC.

Wanda...you have to tell us...come on, you are amongst friends here.
alcarty Comment by: alcarty - 2008-07-15 13:46
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Not funny, Wanda, smart-aleck.
WLC Comment by: WLC - 2008-07-15 13:14
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:)
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