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FantasticFantasy
Raven Feels Much Better
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United States, North Carolina, Hillbilly Hell

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Colors of Friendship

I let Indigo in,
I give, but don't take.

I tell Red my secrets,
she can tell when I'm being fake.

Yellow is like my twin,
we're similar in many ways.

Green is the one I like,
her face got me through some dark days.

I feel connected to Blue,
It makes me said to see him cry.

Orange is kinda funny,
she wants to go into space and fly.

I used to love Violet,
but I'm so over her now.

I know after the rain,
My rainbow won't end and take a bow.

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FantasticFantasy Comment by: FantasticFantasy Online- 2008-07-26 14:43
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Well, I'm sorry FakeSmile.....
Your persoality didn't rhyme with anyone elses....
So I could'nt put you in.

Indigo is Jewel.
Red is Emily.
Yellow is Savannah.
Green is Pao.
Blue is Corey.
Orange is Jordan.

I could only put seven, too. I wanted t odo more, but I decided it would be better if the were all the colors of the rainbow.

I LOVE 'YA THOUGH!!!!
I'll write one for you sometime :D
FakeSmile Comment by: FakeSmile - 2008-07-26 09:49
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this one is kool


ummm....which color am i???

lol

i love this poem raven :D

it makes me think that u r saying every friend is individual :D

none is quite like the other :D

great job

i love it
jcp200817 Comment by: jcp200817 - 2008-07-15 17:53
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interesting write...i liked it very much
rudegrrl Comment by: rudegrrl - 2008-07-15 04:10
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I think you and phillozofee would be great writers together :-)
rudegrrl Comment by: rudegrrl - 2008-07-15 02:43
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I like your sensitivity mixed with amusing detachment..it's different..and clearly your character shines through and understanding of 'colour'..I love it too..perfect
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