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FantasticFantasy
Raven Feels Like Breaking
United States, North Carolina, Hillbilly Hell

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Mickey=Burn the Bridge (trying out lyrics)

I almost feel sorry for you.
Your name hurts
everyone here.

Your parasitic tendencies-
trying to suck out the marrow
that is love from my family-
trying to worm yourself a place
in my heart.

I just wanted to tell you-
you'll never be my father.


You crossed enemy lines
by writing that letter
You're no Father of mine-
never.

You will NEVER be my Father.


I thoight once that I knew you,
but you have become an empty face.
I remember you.
I hope you hear this.
I hope
you memorize
every
single
word.
Because I won't.
I'll forget all of this.
I'll forget you.
But I swear-

I won't forget what you have done.


You crossed enemy lines
when you sent that letter
I just wanted to tell you,
you'll never be my Father- NEVER.


We should just
severe
all
ties.

Because you missed my entire life.
love,
changes,
haircuts and the lack thereof,
everything...
And it's too late to catch up.

Don't contact me because I wrote
All of this from the
Deep of my heart.

This is the eleventh day for you and me.

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FakeSmile Comment by: FakeSmile Online- 2008-07-26 09:45
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ummm....its a very emotional piece....it sounds sad though....like u hate someone so much but u dont want to....but everything they have done to u makes u feel like u have no choice :|

but anywayz its amazing :D
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-07-22 18:42
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This is such an amazing outpouring of emotion-which leads me to believe he has done the burning of the bridge-it's really a shame-incredible talent lies therein...his huge loss!:(
rudegrrl Comment by: rudegrrl - 2008-07-15 02:50
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extrememly powerful piece...I find writing cathartic...reality and fantasy meet?

You're honesty nearly knocks me over..and that is a good thing....to make us 'feel' alive even if and when it hurts like mad
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