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| I love it mate, it certainly stokes the fire in me stirring up some powerful emotions. I'd like to see another like it. |
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Comment by: Dante - 2008-07-18 18:24
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Aside from word combinations, as Janyce pointed out, you have a real talent for emotional combinations. For me, the dark feelings coupled with the angelic, creates a certain level of tension, which keeps me on the edge of my seat. Awsome write, D.
P.S. Punctuation is overrated. |
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You've done a good job of accenting what we do not know of the future.
Well-written, with some good wording. |
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| This catches the eye like the rest of your work. You have a real knack for word combinations. I envy you. Please don't let these get lost-save them on a disk. |
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Comment by: Honor - 2008-07-16 06:02
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| "the darkness that blinds us" i dig that idea. nicely done. |
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