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dannykurl
daniel debelius, jr.
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United States, maryland, baltimore

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Standing upon the rise,
I turn to the way I have come.
Oh, what a straight-path surprise,
To see a slave and his one-way thumb.

How I have raged at those
Whose lives are spent in belief taut
That encountered weed or rose
Is, of some external hand, the result.

Yet here upon the rise,
The non-detoured road I can see.
Yes, it stands before my eyes:
The destiny which has escaped me.

There has been no meandering,
No chaotic steps to my path;
No veered flights in broken wing;
Nothing altered through gift nor through graft.

Just adherence I see,
From point A to Z without slap.
Delusion, the self-charged fee;
Passion and pain? Destiny’s road map.

Above she is waiting;
Above her the peak, stoic, proud.
She smiles, nothing debating.
I go to her, as fate has allowed.

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dannykurl Comment by: dannykurl Online- 2008-07-17 12:11
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I was made for her..........as she was made for me......and there's no getting around the destined coupling

Some people believe this manufacturing process; I do on the third Wednesday of each month

thanks for reading
lflwriter Comment by: lflwriter - 2008-07-17 07:29
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There is a lot here to digest. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I see a man that worked hard and did not stray from his goals and achieved them.
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