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jbuchanan
Jerome Buchanan
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PENITENTIARY PACIFIC chapter 13 excerpt

12:20 a.m.

IN THE heat of the moment, Gabriel Juarez was engulfed in the warmth of his girlfriend, Shantel Capezio. They'd been going at it off and on for more than ninety minutes, and this go-around was as intense as the ninth-inning stretch of a world-series game. Her buttermilk saffron-colored body was so salaciously petite and curvy that her flexibility allowed her to do almost anything while on top of him. Gabriel was experiencing pure ecstasy as she sexed him in his favorite position. He loved it when she took charge, making pleasurable whimpers that sounded like music to his ears.
Shantel's moaning and groaning overwhelmed the silence of the house. Gabriel was unable to hear the cluttered footsteps making their way up the steps toward the room that they were in. So in the midst of their lovemaking, Constance Rheely burst through the door to his room like a wrecking-ball. And when she saw what was going on, she froze in her tracks. Then she erupted like a volcano. 'NO!' she screamed. 'No! ' Gabriel! You bastard!'
Gabriel and Shantel were simultaneously startled as they immediately separated from one another. Shantel quickly covered her naked body in the jade satin sheets while watching Constance's every move. Then she looked at Gabriel and scowled. 'Who is she?! Gabe what the hell is going on?!'
'You shut up bitch!' Constance yelled, pointing her finger at
Shantel. '... And you,' she said, with her watery, evil eyes focused on Gabriel, 'you motherfucker! How dare you! How could you?!'
Gabriel still had a dazzled frown on his face. 'Constance, what the fuck?' he finally said. 'What's your problem? Barging' in here like you lost your mind!'
Shantel was looking confused. 'Gabriel, you know her?!' she said unbelievably.
'What's my problem?!' Constance screamed. 'What's my problem?! I can't believe you! You've got a baby on the way and you ask me what's my problem!?'
'WHAT!?' Shantel screamed. 'Gabriel! Is this true? -- Who is this bitch?!'
'No! Hell naw that's not true ... This girl is crazy ... I don't know what she's talkin' about...'
Tears of fire began to fall from Constance's eyes onto her frustrated face as she listened while Gabriel lied through his teeth. She couldn't believe what she was hearing. He denied that he even knew her outside of school. Anger took over her body and she grabbed the closest thing around, which happened to be a crystal lamp that was on the dresser by the doorway. And while Gabriel was fumbling with his words, lying sincerely to Shantel, Constance threw the lamp in his direction and started to yell and shout.
'You bastard! You LYING motherfucker!'
The lamp flew pass at a high speed and barely missed Shantel's head. It went straight through the window blinds and smashed through the window as Constance continued to scream at the top of her lungs.
'Did you think you could just, fuck me forever without HER finding out?! Huh?!'
'What the hell are you talkin' ab--' Before he could finish his sentence he noticed an iron flying toward him. Shantel instantly jumped out of the bed as the iron whirled through the air and hit Gabriel in the left shoulder. He grabbed his upper arm in pain and shouted, 'Aah, shit!! You stupid bitch! What the fuck is wrong with you?'
'I hate you Gabriel!! -- How could you do this to me? -- You know that I've been with you and only you! How can you deny me like this?' Constance burst into tears and fell to her knees during this humiliating and heart-breaking moment. 'Why?' she asked painfully as she wept. 'Why are you doing me like this?'
Shantel observed as Constance's emotions ran wild. Gabriel was silent and had a sorrowful look on his face. When Shantel noticed his remorseful expression, her pretty face frowned as she stood staring at her so-called boyfriend. 'Why, you - no ' good ' motherfucker!' she angrily started to say. 'You really do know her, don't you? You've been cheating on me all this time!'
'But Shantel ... baby, it's not how it seems. Let me exp--'
'I don't wanna hear your shit,' she pointed down at him. 'You're a damn liar! How could you deceive me like this Gabriel? You should be ashamed of yourself.' She snatched a robe from the doorknob of the closet and quickly wrapped it around her body. Then she pointed down at him again and said, 'If that young girl is pregnant ... by you ... then don't bother speaking to me again, EVER!'
Shantel looked over at Constance once again, who was still on her knees crying hysterically with her face in her hands, and shook her head in pity. Then she looked back at Gabriel and said, 'I can't...

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RJWilliams Comment by: RJWilliams - 2007-05-15 13:25
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I think I need to start from the beginning after this
ladyfogg Comment by: ladyfogg - 2006-04-19 05:20
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Nicely done. I can see the scene and feel the emotions.

Gigi
jennychithra Comment by: jennychithra - 2005-12-06 13:16
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i liked this best. wish i could read more...
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