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DavidHe
David He
China, Pinliang, Pingliang

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Quiet rippled lake
The willow strings reach to draw
The moon escaping

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-07-29 16:50
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Bebe, nice to hear from you again. I will learn from you. Best wishes.
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange Online- 2008-07-29 10:23
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Absolutely serene...I love it! I will close my eyes again...Bebe=}
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-07-26 04:48
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Thanks very much, Adsaige, for the nice comment. It is a traditional haiku with 5-7-5 syllables. Best wishes.
adsaige Comment by: adsaige - 2008-07-23 16:03
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I see, haiku? Of tradition, or is
it the more contemporary model?
Never was good at writing haikus
but a very beautiful write.

Please consider titling your posts.

Thanks for the comment.
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe - 2008-07-20 18:22
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Again, thanks a lot, Mick. Best wishes.
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