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| Huge love for haiku as they are a wonderful release, this piece has the impact that makes a great haiku. B |
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| Loved this piece |
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Comment by: alcarty - 2008-07-21 12:47
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| You captured the moment, Phil. The image is photographic. Good read. |
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Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-07-20 18:44
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Great work, I am ready to learn from your other haiku. I would prefer you to edit the khaiku like the following. Best wishes
Autumn lake mirror
Cold breeze skirrs, water ripples
Shattering the sky |
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Comment by: Mick - 2008-07-20 16:44
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| Nice, powerful Haiku Phil. ;) |
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