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Scars Don't Heal
Scars, no one can see
constant reminders
Even surgeon's
sharp knifes don't reveal them
Wondering how,
How to heal them
Scars so deep
No understanding
of how they got there
That life has made them
inside, hiding from view
'til hard they seemingly heal
But forgetting never comes
It's no one's fault
everyone's an idiot
We're all the same
they are there, all the same
July 20 2008
© 2008 Identitycrisis
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| The only thing that puzzled me was why "Wondering how" is followed by a question mark rather than a comma. It seemed to be more of a statement, like "wondering how, how to heal them..." I particularly like the lines "It's no one's fault, everyone's an idiot." Ah, happy days... |
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Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-07-20 19:50
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| A very good poem, a very good thought. Every one has scars in life, but sometimes it is none of their faults. Great. Well done. Best wishes. |
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